awesomeBlossom [AB] started a memo on Oli’s Weblog at ??:??.
AB: >w< ~ Hey guys.
AB: >w< ~ Even though we don’t usually come here any more, I’m going to ask you to search for Locked. On this blog, I mean. It’s by me. Loli~<3. :U Locked, the TO BE CONTINUED STORY?
AB: >w< ~ Well, I remade it. Here ya go. But a bit of notice, I was being Mary Sue-ish for the story. I CAN MAKE SO MUCH BETTER THAN THIS, I ASSURE YOU.
[ The Newly Improved! ]
Locked
It was a hot summer afternoon. Lolithon, Olimar, and Hershey were playing hide and seek in Waddlez’s mansion. Or rather, the mansion’s yard. There weren’t many thick bushes for hiding, so it wasn’t fair enough. The girls found each other easily. After their 5th game of failed hide and seek, the trio agreed to rest. Loli sipped her lemonade. “So, what’s been going on? We really need some catching up to do.” Olimar finally said, breaking the awkward silence. “Everything’s fine on my end, what about you guys?” the girl nicknamed “Loli” responded. “The same here,” so claims the girl named after a chocolate delicacy. Oli ended said short conversation with a nod, signaling the same.
After a while, the door opened. Waddlez, the mansion owner, popped out. “Why don’t you guys come in? It’s cooler in here.” The girls looked amongst themselves, and went in. Inside, they saw Ballet, whom they affectionately called Bal. “Hey, guys! How was your game of hide ‘n’ seek?” The trio, annoyed about their game outside, simultaneously agreed that it was the most horrible game EVER. They all laughed. Waddlez excused himself from the conversation and walked away to the kitchen to get them some iced tea.
But he didn’t come back.
And that’s when things got suspicious, or at least for Loli.
“Hey guys, don’t you guys notice this house? I mean… How you feel in it. The aura.” Loli whispered. The others nodded. “It’s weird, as if someone’s watching us,” she continued. The mention of this made everyone look around and tense up.
CREAAAAK…
The door opened. Everybody stared at it. A mysterious figure draped in a black cloak took two “Easter Eggs” and dropped them on this floor. One was a smoke releaser, and as the name implies, it released smoke. The figure took one of the girls away, leaving the others to wonder where she went. The other one was a time bomb. It was set for 10 seconds. They had ten seconds to leave.
Oli was the first one to realize this.
“Guys! It’s a time bomb! We gotta get outta here!!” She shouted, panicking. Everyone followed her word, and ran out. The house exploded. Into smithereens. Into bits. Into—Okay, you get the idea.
Fortunately, the girls got out with only very , if at all, minor cuts. None gushing out blood or anything of the sort. Another girl ran towards their direction, panting. “Guys! Guys!” called out the girl. The others looked towards her direction, one of them calling out, “CBA!” The mentioned girl stopped right in front of the group. She looked over the girls. “I can see you guys are ok, but aren’t there supposed to be two more people?”
Bal’s eyes began to widen. “Loli and Waddlez are missing!” Hershey gasped and covered her mouth with her hands. “No…”
Meanwhile, Loli was thrown into a paradise styled dungeon. Inside, she saw Waddlez frolicking in the fields. “Oh, Waddlez!” “Hello! It’s fun in here~” Loli smiled and rolled her eyes. “This would be the weirdest thing ever.”
Oli lead them all over the Dizzian’s world, all the way ‘til sundown. Oli had to drop everyone off at their houses, but agreed to meet in Wildwood Forest and climb that rock pile blocking the way to the city. After the said was done, they did so, and found a castle gate. It was the road to the city ahead. But two guards were there. They stopped them and asked, “What business do you have here? We do not need any random Dizzians wandering about the road to Canal City. It is only for the famous and, or, special people. Referring to the Special People, we need to protect them from any harm, or they will release a powerful skill unto the world. It will cause the destruction to mankind.” Oh derp Mary Sue. IT’S FOR THE SAKE OF THE STORY, I’M SORRY. ;A;
“We need our friend, Lolithon.” Olimar stated plainly. “You didn’t have to take her away like a kidnapper or something. I mean, seriously.” Hershey added. “And what kind of power would Loli have anyway? She is just a regular girl like us.” CBA pressed on the matter. “And so is Waddlez! Except him being a guy and all. He’s a regular guy.” Ballet said, giggling at the last sentence she made. “So can you please release them?” They pleaded. The soldiers put their spears to use, and pointed them at the direction of the girls. “We already told you the reason we cannot release them. They are ‘Special’.”
“But that doesn’t mean they can’t have a normal life!”
Returning to our captives, we found them in a rather… odd situation. Waddlez was looking at the Zaap thingy, and Loli was leafing through her sketchbook. She looked up and called out, “Hey, Waddlez, don’t touch that thing. We can’t afford losing you now. Why don’t you come over here?” He did so. “Cool drawings.” “Thanks.” She smiled at him. He looked up. “So how do you think we’re gonna get out?” “Heck, if I knew, I would be getting us out right now!” Both laughed, and Loli took out her heart charm. “Oh, if only…” And then an idea struck her. “Friendship!” Waddlez looked at her strangely. “Wha?” She looked at it. “Oh, yeah. It’s real life. I forgot. Hah-“
Our heroes were still fighting with the guards, although, it would be unlikely that they would need some busting now. Oli saw an opening, and busted through anyways. She was there just in time. Loli was glowing. “Whoa, what the?” CBA looked at her with a, “WTF?” face. And their accessories started to glow too.
Loli turned into the Mage of Friendship.
Oli was the Heir of Water.
CBA, the Conductor of Air.
Ballet would be the Caretaker of Plants.
Last but not least, Hershey, with the title of Keeper of Animals.
And of course Waddlez was there to witness it. Hehe. AND THEY BUSTED OUT EPICLY THE END, DERRRRP.
AB: >w< ~ Well here. The remake. Yay.
AB: >w< ~ If you get all the way down here, I’m going to say. GO READ HOMESTUCK. IT’S AWESOME, EVEN THOUGH IT’S SLOW IN THE FIRST ACTS. PLEASE DON’T SKIP AHEAD. IT MAKES SENSE IF YOU JUST READ FROM THE BEGINNING. Just search Homestuck on the Google or somehting. Or click this. http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6&p=001901 It’s basically an online book. :3
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